This is the hardest chapter I have ever written! I have to pull all my knowledge of Myths into this one chapter. Not an easy task. I'll have to take my time with this chapter. I'll probably start work on Twenty-one and Twenty-two before I complete Twenty.
I've expanded the time I have to work on my novel. I recently figured out that it would take more chapter than I had originally planned to complete the book. I think we are looking at Thirty odd chapters instead of Twenty-six.
I have commissioned an anime artist to render the cover of my book and possibly do some interior work. I'll post the art here when it is completed. The artist is very talented. She goes by Lady Shireu on deviantArt.
Post #2. Is this part of the same novel you've already posted? I'm just curious. I would agrees that it is definitely a darker writing style, but it's good. It has an edgier, modern-allure that will catch the ex-Harry Potterite and disappointed Eragon fan niche. I am surprised that you are not done yet. It sounds pretty polished. I am a little confused with the types of demons, but since it's a prologue I guess that's only normal.As for the graphicness, I know where you are coming from. My novel is for a slightly younger crowd, but one of my plote structures centers around some more mature content. The second book I am working on now has some more graphically violent scenes in it, but I'm trying to stick with a "leave it implied" approach. However, I am starting to have problems with that because I need some poignant scenes to make a point. Let me know when you publish. I would definitely be interested in reading more. Post #30 1 reply Then again, second thoughts. Have you seen some of the stuff they stock on middle school book shelves? My school library regularly stocked Orson-Scott Card's books and SHADE"S CHILDREN as well. I don't think it's as much of the violence and blatant sex that scares people so much as the idea of different viewpoints. With which, demons, yeah, you're probably walking a thin line.
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Is this part of the same novel you've already posted? I'm just curious. I would agrees that it is definitely a darker writing style, but it's good. It has an edgier, modern-allure that will catch the ex-Harry Potterite and disappointed Eragon fan niche. I am surprised that you are not done yet. It sounds pretty polished. I am a little confused with the types of demons, but since it's a prologue I guess that's only normal.As for the graphicness, I know where you are coming from. My novel is for a slightly younger crowd, but one of my plote structures centers around some more mature content. The second book I am working on now has some more graphically violent scenes in it, but I'm trying to stick with a "leave it implied" approach. However, I am starting to have problems with that because I need some poignant scenes to make a point. Let me know when you publish. I would definitely be interested in reading more.
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Then again, second thoughts. Have you seen some of the stuff they stock on middle school book shelves? My school library regularly stocked Orson-Scott Card's books and SHADE"S CHILDREN as well. I don't think it's as much of the violence and blatant sex that scares people so much as the idea of different viewpoints. With which, demons, yeah, you're probably walking a thin line.
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